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Steve Cerruti wrote:
> In general I think it is pretty good. However, I think you would be
> better to hit the heart of the matter right up front.
>
> I'd focus more on the $6000 for Devine and less on the $12000 for
> Hariri because a lot of people are sympathetic for the plight of the
> uninsured and are probably unaware of how Hariri has acted.
>
> So, I'd start with an action statement like:
>
> "We can rollback the illegal assessment increase that will is going
> directly into the pockets of the HOA board. You need to act now, sign
> the proxy below or attend the Jan. 17th meeting."
>
What about my mayoral propaganda and statements like "I'll fight for
you." How does it strike you.
-Sub
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